Thursday, August 23, 2012

The Sentiments of a Hidden Lover


The Sentiments of a Hidden Lover

I don't know why I feel this way,
Kept thinking of you through night and day.
My whole life, I've never been this stupefied,
But through all experiences, I've never been this alive.

We met in a very common manner,
But still, I never had a single word to utter.
I don't even know who you really are,
But in just a single gaze, to my heart you're familiar.

Starting that day, I never stopped thinking,
How could a complete stranger be of my liking?
You've never even talked to me before,
But your voice, I wanted to hear more.

These feelings of mine, I could not contain,
But I wish you won't regard it with disdain.
I hope that in these revelations, you won't feel eerie,
And would simply listen to this quiet reverie.

At dahil PBB Teens na tayong sa mga panahon na ito, heto ang poem para sa'yo!~ Haha

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At Friday, August 24, 2012 , Blogger L.Torres, RN said...

ayieee... ikaw na ang inlab! hohoho =P

 
At Friday, August 24, 2012 , Blogger ventocoseuss said...

Hehe.. Madalang lang mag-PBB Teens. Makiuso! Haha

 
At Monday, October 15, 2012 , Blogger xany said...

informative one...

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At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Anonymous Jerome Ibuyan said...

I think it fits to a song I'm listening right now, "So Much In Love" by Zia Quizon. PBB TEENS! =)

 
At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Blogger papaleng said...

Ang sweet naman ng thoughts. Good rhyme, though medyo hindi fluid ang flow.

 
At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Blogger Maria Gemma Hilotin said...

love is in the air!!! sana real love ha? not in love with the idea of love hehe :)

 
At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Anonymous Franc Ramon said...

Nice poem. Nakakaturete ang pag-ibig.

 
At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Blogger Raine Pal said...

Hahahaha....sapol ng mga inlove sa ngayon...PBB teens effect. BTW nice poem.

 
At Saturday, October 20, 2012 , Anonymous jsncruz said...

You shouldn't have mentioned the PBB Teens line at the end; I was almost in the moment :P

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Anonymous Ness said...

PBB Teens talaga?! Ahaha! Minsan nakakasagabal yang pagibig e. Minsan din bawal. But masarap din minsan ang bawal. Minsan lang naman. Haha!

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Anonymous dimaks | The Urban Walker said...

The flow of the storyline is simple but it became colossal due to your revelation. Your way of saying it took the blood of a poet. Well done!

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

Oh what love can do... no wonder so many songs and poems have been written in its name.

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

hahaha. hidden lover, you better not contain them that long or it will really remain hidden.

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Rachelle said...

A very nice poem. Simple yet truthful.

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger dsfds said...

bagay sayo ang kantang torpe song #5 ng MYMP

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

Wow ... secret lover ... most painful kind.

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Anonymous Michelle said...

Oh no! Goosebumps! My latest blog was inspired by a particular person in mind. The first blogpost was dedicated to him. He doesn't know about it LOL. Just so you know you're not alone in secretly admiring a person :D

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Budget Biyahera said...

I actually felt this kind of admiration for my beau.. when he didn't knew me yet. I was sort of cyber stalking him until he finally sensed that I was worth talking to..hehe!

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

ooohhh.. someone's inlove! anlakas maka-myrtle ang peg! :)

 
At Sunday, October 21, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

It's just always been a thought and never had chance to write a poem for my highschool crush... Hindi talaga ako makata. lol.

 
At Monday, October 22, 2012 , Blogger Unknown said...

All hail, great!

 
At Tuesday, October 23, 2012 , Blogger Simplymarrimye said...

A Secret Admirer... what a suppressed feelings the person has. It's depressing that sometimes you can hardly express your deepest adoration to the LOVE of your life. These are truly heartfelt sentiments,

 
At Thursday, October 25, 2012 , Blogger merlmd said...

love is what makes the world go round and the hardest is unrequited love ;)

 
At Tuesday, October 30, 2012 , Anonymous ralph said...

i think this a good description of having a crush on someone... kaya pala pbb teens... lol. you created a poem for them... napakaswerte naman nila sayo. lovely poem, by the way. Yahweh bless.

 

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