The Sentiments of a Hidden Lover


The Sentiments of a Hidden Lover

I don't know why I feel this way,
Kept thinking of you through night and day.
My whole life, I've never been this stupefied,
But through all experiences, I've never been this alive.

We met in a very common manner,
But still, I never had a single word to utter.
I don't even know who you really are,
But in just a single gaze, to my heart you're familiar.

Starting that day, I never stopped thinking,
How could a complete stranger be of my liking?
You've never even talked to me before,
But your voice, I wanted to hear more.

These feelings of mine, I could not contain,
But I wish you won't regard it with disdain.
I hope that in these revelations, you won't feel eerie,
And would simply listen to this quiet reverie.

At dahil PBB Teens na tayong sa mga panahon na ito, heto ang poem para sa'yo!~ Haha

25 comments:

  1. ayieee... ikaw na ang inlab! hohoho =P

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  2. Hehe.. Madalang lang mag-PBB Teens. Makiuso! Haha

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  3. Naks! Ganda ng tula mo ah! Kinikilig ako! hehehe! ^◡^

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    Thanks! ^◡^

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  4. informative one...

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  5. I think it fits to a song I'm listening right now, "So Much In Love" by Zia Quizon. PBB TEENS! =)

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  6. Ang sweet naman ng thoughts. Good rhyme, though medyo hindi fluid ang flow.

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  7. love is in the air!!! sana real love ha? not in love with the idea of love hehe :)

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  8. Nice poem. Nakakaturete ang pag-ibig.

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  9. Hahahaha....sapol ng mga inlove sa ngayon...PBB teens effect. BTW nice poem.

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  10. You shouldn't have mentioned the PBB Teens line at the end; I was almost in the moment :P

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  11. PBB Teens talaga?! Ahaha! Minsan nakakasagabal yang pagibig e. Minsan din bawal. But masarap din minsan ang bawal. Minsan lang naman. Haha!

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  12. The flow of the storyline is simple but it became colossal due to your revelation. Your way of saying it took the blood of a poet. Well done!

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  13. Oh what love can do... no wonder so many songs and poems have been written in its name.

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  14. hahaha. hidden lover, you better not contain them that long or it will really remain hidden.

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  15. A very nice poem. Simple yet truthful.

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  16. bagay sayo ang kantang torpe song #5 ng MYMP

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  17. Wow ... secret lover ... most painful kind.

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  18. Oh no! Goosebumps! My latest blog was inspired by a particular person in mind. The first blogpost was dedicated to him. He doesn't know about it LOL. Just so you know you're not alone in secretly admiring a person :D

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  19. I actually felt this kind of admiration for my beau.. when he didn't knew me yet. I was sort of cyber stalking him until he finally sensed that I was worth talking to..hehe!

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  20. ooohhh.. someone's inlove! anlakas maka-myrtle ang peg! :)

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  21. It's just always been a thought and never had chance to write a poem for my highschool crush... Hindi talaga ako makata. lol.

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  22. A Secret Admirer... what a suppressed feelings the person has. It's depressing that sometimes you can hardly express your deepest adoration to the LOVE of your life. These are truly heartfelt sentiments,

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  23. love is what makes the world go round and the hardest is unrequited love ;)

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  24. i think this a good description of having a crush on someone... kaya pala pbb teens... lol. you created a poem for them... napakaswerte naman nila sayo. lovely poem, by the way. Yahweh bless.

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